WALT: Write a summary about the journal The Desert Kaupoi
This week I have been reading a journal about the war in 1914 onto 1938. A key idea from this journal is bravery. Bravery was shown by how Mcdonald, one of the soldiers threw their arm with fury after it had been blown off by a enemy machine gun post. Another key idea was heroism,Tony was one of the soldiers that was a true hero because he cared for those that were sick in the war and looked after them. One day Tony was shot and his leader dragged him to safety he wanted to go on and keep fighting until he died,he earned the military cross for his actions on the day,after a while Tony passed away on 29 May 1970.
This week I have been reading a journal about the war in 1914 onto 1938. A key idea from this journal is bravery. Bravery was shown by how Mcdonald, one of the soldiers threw their arm with fury after it had been blown off by a enemy machine gun post. Another key idea was heroism,Tony was one of the soldiers that was a true hero because he cared for those that were sick in the war and looked after them. One day Tony was shot and his leader dragged him to safety he wanted to go on and keep fighting until he died,he earned the military cross for his actions on the day,after a while Tony passed away on 29 May 1970.
Hi Amon,
ReplyDeleteYou have an amazing piece of work, but I thought you would be able to work on adding more detail to your description, but anyways keep up the amazing work Amon.