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Wednesday, 16 August 2017

My Wrestling Hobby

My Narrative Writting

THE DEADLY FINISH

One spooky, scary night in the woods there was gorilla named Ivan. Ivan has a wife and 2 kids. Ivan lives in the woods with troops and his family.  Ivan is a gorilla who cared very much for his family he was very sensitive but he liked to find food.

So one day he went all alone to find some food for his family he was very exhausted but he never gave up.So he went out to the woods and found no bananas but he found a vampire and wolves he tried to fight them off but there were to much he was bitten scratched by the wolves and they trapped him in a net.

Although Ivan was trapped Ivan did not give up he called for help (oo ahh ahh) so then the apes came they look very angry they had big deadly weapons so they attacked the wolves and left the vampire to Ivan, Ivan punched the vampire with all of his strength and power so the vampire flew away and never ever came back!.     

Wednesday, 21 June 2017

Walt to do critcial writting

I don't get any of them because it doesn't relate to what they are selling and what they are trying to manipulate people to buy becuase it makes you think that if you eat it you will be happy





Tuesday, 13 June 2017

Banana bread

Today in room 7 we made banana bread it was really cool I think that it was amazing creating and experiencing how to make banana bread it was really Delicious.I really looking forward to make something else in the future.How to make the banana bread you need Ripe bananas, butter, sugar, egg, vanilla, baking soda, and flour.And its that easy so if you wanna give it a shot go ahead.  

Thursday, 8 June 2017

should fidget spinners be allowed in class?

In Room 7 we had a debate about should fidget spinners be allowed in the classroom i was on for because they are very  popular toy that can bring you joy and happiness.


I think fidget spinners should be allowed in the classroom so when you are angry then you can spin it and calm down.


Fidget spinners are a good toy that keeps you calm and make you happy.

Phones should not be in Schools?

I think that phones should not be for children because they are not mature enough.

For example So If they get angry they might chuck there phone away and then that will be a waste of money.


Also they might be talking to others when they are not supposed to be in learning time.

For example Like some people used to go on a website called quizup.com it is a website that people used to talk to each other in learning time.

And they might go on something rude and they will not be allowed to look at.

So if they watch something rude but they try to joke around with some people they might not take it as a joke then they will tell the teacher.

For example like when they are trying to be funny they might go overboard and do something rude.


Tuesday, 30 May 2017

Sign Language

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Today in room 7 we had sign language we had a lady named Rachel. She is deaf and can not speak she taught us how to speak NZSL. I thought it would be really hard but actually it wasn't I caught it up easy.    

Monday, 29 May 2017

Why zoos should not exsist

Why zoos should not exist

I think zoos should not exist because many animals have died in zoos because they are not well cared for. Another reason why zoos should not exist because some are not treated fairly and Some animals are used for entertainment.

 Many have died because are not well cared for. For example a giraffe was killed and fed to lions. It means that some animals are killed and fed to animals.

Another reason why zoos should not exist because some animals are not treated fairly. For example zookeepers painted stripes on a donkey to make it look like a zebra.
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Animals are used for entertainment. For example thousands of animals are forced to perform silly acts.confusing tricks under the threat of physical punishment.










Thursday, 18 May 2017

WALT read nutritional information

Popcorn has...


  • 900mg of sodium/salt
  • 2290 kj energy
  • 6.0 of protein
  • 0.7 of sugar
  • fat total 36.3
  • dietary fibre 8.0g
  • I think that people should stop eating heaps of bad food because it might make them fat

Friday, 31 March 2017

Movie

Game Review


WALT: I am learning to critically evaluate a game

Your name:Auckland

I played the game:Panmure monopoly
This game is made by the company:Kordell,lopi and ariki.
I played this game with:Amon,saia and suave.


The purpose of this game is to to get lots of money so you don't lose.

My favourite thing about this game was getting lots of money.

One thing I didn’t like about this game was: Nothing

This game is good to play by with a group because:its not a 1 player game.



I would rate this game 10 out of 10 because: it was really cool.

If I could recommend something to make this game better, it would nothing because it was cool.


This game is different from (the game you played last week) because:






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Amon Fast finishers T1W9 Reading activity

Monday, 27 March 2017

LIne basketball

On Monday 27th of March 2k17 skateboard was canceled so room 8 asked us if they want play a game of line basket ball and we yelled yes.


And the 2 refs was Miss Ashley and Miss Morrison so everybody participate It was fun but some people pushed and shoved but at the end of the day every body shaked hands but lined up the best.


To leave the bottom court's it was really fun I was the first person to get the ball in the hoop.



I was really proud of room 7 because this the fourth time we have beaten room 8 four times in a row.At the end of the day everyone was shaking hands and showing manaakitanga.






Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R3
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
21
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)


Monday T1W9 Reading activity

Tuesday, 21 March 2017

AMETI MAP


This is what we did today it was fun did you know that the Panmure roundabout is going to be traffic light's.

Wednesday, 8 March 2017

💎Genius Gems w6 follow up💎

🍏The House Meeting🍏


Yesterday we had house meetings.I went and sat straight at the front next to my sister Losana.When I got there Frances and Knef Was the leader of Benghazi.We choose to go to the pools in Parnell with pizza.But there was another good idea green day it is when everybody where's green for the rest of the day.

What is a topic sentence a topic sentence is a sentence about the topic.

Supporting sentence a supporting sentence is little ideas that help the main idea.

Concluding sentence a sentence that you have to say about your own thought's

Friday, 3 March 2017

🎲Amon Game Review🎲


WALT: I am learning to critically evaluate a game

Your name:

I played the game: Game of life
This game is made by the company:Milton Bradley Company in 1963, had some differences from later versions.
I played this game with:: Miss Fepuleai, Corale,


The purpose of this game is to (Hint: how do you win this game?):you have to count who ever has the most money at the end wins.

My favourite thing about this game was:Having fun with others and teachers.

One thing I didn’t like about this game was:We did not know how to play exactly

This game is good to play by yourself/with a friend/with a group because:Friends because you have fun and would show you are using social well being in Haura.



I would rate this game 8 out of 10 because:it was not really that fun but this what I think it would be rated.

If I could recommend something to make this game better, it would be:Make people in different colours.


This game is better/worse/different from (the game you played last week) because:Different to last week’s game because the game I played last week was called connect four.

🎒Tamaki Creek🎒

On Wednesday first of march Room 7, Room 4 and Room 2 were going to the creek. When we were going to the Miss Park shouted ‘can we come with you?’. Then Miss Ashley shouted ‘sure’.
While we were strolling we saw Youthtown. We went because it was inquiry and for a recount.

When we arrived we were exhausted, unfresh and desperate. When we walked on the bank we explored the meadow to see what was there.

When we were explored the meadow we little tiny rocks that looked like a meteor and there was a dead rat with maggots eating it. While we were strolling through the meadows we saw red, old leafs.

When we came back we from the creek we had 1 milk or 2  .After that we had to write the things that we saw at the creek.But at the end of the day I learned something new that there a moss and water rats.So I would like to say thank you Miss Ashley for giving me this big experience and the tamaki creek and never thought that water rats were true.




🎒Amon Complex Sentences🎒

🍾No Sugar before school - Amon🍾

Wednesday, 1 March 2017

⚾SoftBall Tourament⚾

Amon Compound Sentences

Amon Homophone

✍I am learning to identify homographs✍

I am learning to identify homographs
I am learning to use homographs in a sentence to show the different meanings

For each word below, think of two meanings for it and write 2 sentences that shows the different meanings of the word. The first two has been done for you.

If you don’t know any other meanings for the word, Google it.

Back
I turned back and walked back where I came from.
Back
My back is under my neck and above my legs.
Change
After swimming I had to change out of my wet togs.
Change
The shopkeeper gave me my change which was $2.
Light I turned on the light.
Light When I was holding the baby it was light.
Wind When I went outside I felt wind
Wind I wind down the window.
Sink When I jumped in the big pool I was about to sink.
Sink When my mum was washing the dishes I saw the sink.
Sign My mum had to sign the permission slip for the field trip.
Sign When I saw the gas station it had a sign.
Bass is a kind of drum.
Bass is a kind of fish.
Down Sometimes I feel down.
Down When I go to high I say go back down.
Rock When I saw a stone a thought it was a rock.
Rock When I went the party I wanted to rock and roll.
Lead Sometimes I feel like a leader.
Lead When I was leading it was in the front and I lead the team to the field.
Bat When I was playing cricket I needed Cricket bat to play.
Bat I have never seen a real life bat.
Can I drink two cans of coke cola.
Can I can do this.
Row Row row your boat gently down the street
Row I see 4 rows
Bank I see money in the bank.
Bank I ran up the bank to the top of the hill.
Fine her hair is fine
Fine pay the fine

Friday, 24 February 2017

Amon and Sosia Game Review


WALT: I am learning to critically evaluate a game

Your name:Amon and Sosaia

I played the game:Connect four and cluedo,
Made by: David Bowie
I played this game with:Amon Viliami and Sosaia


The purpose of this game is to (Hint: how do you win this game?)You have to connect four with little tokens

My favourite thing about this game was:winning

One thing I didn’t like about this game was:That you had to vs harder players

This game is good to play by yourself/with a friend/with a group because:Group



I would rate this game 10 out of 10 because:It makes us have fun and communicate with others.

If I could recommend something to make this game better, it would be:Make it four players



Add any other comments about this game here:No

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Amon Student Goals - Whanau Conference



Tamaki Primary Student
Term - 1,  2017


Name - Amon Taakimoeaka


My goals for Reading this Term are -
  • To make connections between prior knowledge and examples in the text in order to understand abstract ideas.
You can help me by
Discussing a story I read to make sure I have not missed any ideas.
Encourage me to make connections to the story with my own experiences.
Explain the meaning of unknown words.
My goals for Writing this Term are -
  • To proofread for spelling and accuracy.
  • To use specific vocabulary, similes and metaphors .
You can help me by
Checking if I have placed my punctuation correctly in my story.
Ask me to write about my day everyday so I get used to writing, and read it back to myself to look for mistakes.
My goals for Maths this Term are -
  • To find a unit fraction of a set of multiplications.1-5 of 35 using 5x7=35
  • To recall all the basic multiplication facts up to 10x10=100
You can help me by
Encouraging me to practise my times table at home.




















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Name :  Amon Taakimoeaka


Class : Room 7


Blog address : http://tpsamont.blogspot.com/


Class Teacher: Miss Ashley