I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mrs Yandall.
Tuesday 21 June 2016
Thursday 16 June 2016
Amon-Shark Story
Name:Amon
Words to describe the Shark:
- Angry hungry heart
Words to describe the water:
- Dark
Words to describe the helicopter:
- Weak broken
My Story starts here: Once upon a time, not so long ago, there lived a shark named Simon and a army named Dudley. They lived in the ocean not too far from a beautiful sandy beach a tall lighthouse and a dark murky swamp.Now Simon and his shark army where ready to go to war but one shark named Kofi kingston and one human named Frank where friends both of there dads hated each other they had a lot in comman Frank and Kofi kingston. Until there dads died Kofi knew what he had to do he had to kill Frank. Kofi and Frank met up in the water again then Kofi bite Frank.
THE END
Book Review of my In the beginning-Amon
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BOOK REVIEW
Title:In the beging
Author:Peter Gossage
What would you rate this book out of 10?
Who are you recommending this book to?
(Other year 5 and 6 students? Tamaki Students? Adults? People who like scary/funny stories?)Soane
Who were the main characters in this book?Tane and T’u
What was the theme of the book?
(Was it funny? Was it scary? Did it contain lots of action?)
Funny,Scary
What was your favourite part of the book?When Rongo became the God of peace
If you had to use 6 words to describe the book what words would they be?
1.Awsome
2.cool
3.Sad
4.Scary
5.Funny
6.Fun
Review written by:
Book Review of My Mum-Amon
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BOOK REVIEW
Title:Crinkum Crankum
Author:Margaret Mahy
What would you rate this book out of 10?7out of a 10
Who are you recommending this book to?
(Other year 5 and 6 students? Tamaki Students? Adults? People who like scary/funny stories?)Roy Kelly
Who were the main characters in this book?The Tree fairy god mother and the Witch
What was the theme of the book?
(Was it funny? Was it scary? Did it contain lots of action?)
It was scary and funny
What was your favourite part of the book?When the kids went on the tree and said THIS IS THE BEST TREE!
If you had to use 6 words to describe the book what words would they be?
1.funny
2.cool
3.scary
4.silly
5.fun
6.Excited
Review written by: Amon Ta’akimoeaka
Book Review of Crinkum Crankum-Amon
CTO this document into your reading folder with the title “Book Review of TITLE - your name”
BOOK REVIEW
Title:Crinkum Crankum
Author:Margaret Mahy
What would you rate this book out of 10?7out of a 10
Who are you recommending this book to?
(Other year 5 and 6 students? Tamaki Students? Adults? People who like scary/funny stories?)Roy Kelly
Who were the main characters in this book?The Tree fairy god mother and the Witch
What was the theme of the book?
(Was it funny? Was it scary? Did it contain lots of action?)
It was scary and funny
What was your favourite part of the book?When the kids went on the tree and said THIS IS THE BEST TREE!
If you had to use 6 words to describe the book what words would they be?
1.funny
2.cool
3.scary
4.silly
5.fun
6.Excited
Review written by: Amon Ta’akimoeaka
Thursday 9 June 2016
Thursday 2 June 2016
Wednesday 1 June 2016
Crafts
WALT;Make scoobies this how far I have went for the last 2 weeks
It is hard at the start but when you really get it it will be easy
It is hard a little bit but you will get the hang of it
It is hard at the start but when you really get it it will be easy
It is hard a little bit but you will get the hang of it
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