Hello Amon, I really like how you added pictures into your DLO to make everyone visualize what kind of foods were at our shared lunch! Next tim you can maybe add more description in your actual blog talking about what you enjoyed etc just to make your blog upto the standard! Over that it was great reading your reflection! Keep it up!
I really enjoy reading down the fun information about what we did at shared lunch for the adult helpers at camp.I really enjoyed that you wrote down how you felt about the shared lunch which was very AMAZING.
Something I think you should work on will be writing down what you enjoyed,what you did not enjoy,what you found chanllenging,next steps and other information for your readers to know more about the FUN & AMAZING shared lunch we had.
Hello Amon,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added pictures into your DLO to make everyone visualize what kind of foods were at our shared lunch! Next tim you can maybe add more description in your actual blog talking about what you enjoyed etc just to make your blog upto the standard! Over that it was great reading your reflection! Keep it up!
- Lydia.
Check your spelling before you comment but thanks for the feed back
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DeleteHello Amon,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy reading down the fun information about what we did at shared lunch for the adult helpers at camp.I really enjoyed that you wrote down how you felt about the shared lunch which was very AMAZING.
Something I think you should work on will be writing down what you enjoyed,what you did not enjoy,what you found chanllenging,next steps and other information for your readers to know more about the FUN & AMAZING shared lunch we had.
-ENJOY & GREAT JOB
-Aletheia!